Perfect

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by CrystalSapphire (Uzuri uongo ndani) on Monday, 18-Oct-2010 11:07:05

"Perfect"
by La'Chelle Scarlet

Perfect is the breeze,
From the cool seas.
Perfect is a blue Jay,
With its soft song.
Perfect is silence,
When spent with you.

As I lie here,
Listening to you sleep,
So calm and peacefully,
I crave to be there in your arms.
For I want you to hold me tight,
All through the night.
I want to wake by a soft gentle kiss.
I want to feel just the best touch.

I crave the things I dream.
I want them to all to shoot out like a beam.
I love you.

I'm yours and your mine.
We have made it work,
Despite the impossible.
It is ment to be.
Loving you,
Is so perfect.

Post 2 by Sword of Sapphire (Whether you agree with my opinion or not, you're still gonna read it!) on Wednesday, 24-Nov-2010 11:27:53

This poem is so full of love, I can feel it. Well done.

Post 3 by Miss Gorgeous (I'm going for the prolific poster awards!) on Saturday, 27-Nov-2010 1:53:28

Nice job writing your poem. I like the third and the forth stanza. Its so cute.

Post 4 by CrystalSapphire (Uzuri uongo ndani) on Monday, 29-Nov-2010 9:47:07

thanks. The first is my favorite. lol